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PostSubject: Serious business   Tue Dec 15, 2015 12:40 am

I don't remember if there's already a topic for this one but oh well.


Okay, so for the written out Bunny and Kujo, I had some ideas regarding Imani. So in the post I said her kid was killed in the war so I decided that she's not for peace. But she only appears to advocate it so she can get close to bunny. Since I think there would be a lot of pressure on bunny and kujo to have a kid, I imagine it being like they need to have on to show that the country is truly united. I think Imani would find ways to sabotage it. Like giving bunny tea at bedtime that's kind of like a birth control pill. And I thought about on their wedding night, she could like slip something to bunny to like 'make the first time easier' but it's just a spermicidal lube. Cause lets be real, while it would be cute for Kujo not to touch her on their wedding night, you know he's gotta consummate the marriage cause it's his duty.

And since she's not having a kid as promised it could cause tension with her and Kujo, because he expects her to be fertile. Cause that's just how kings were. Like the drow court could be pissed

I was gonna give bunny a lady in waiting. who I think might be from a different court/kingdom who will tie in with the imani thing

And since Kujo is going to have a concubine would bunny want one? I could see her maybe flirting with Kinichi, or talking to him. idk. Which again in turn will piss kujo off and then cause turmoil in their relationship again. Like maybe while one prince is named king he needs to have a male heir to seal his seat on the throne. So bunny talking to kinichi could potentially sabotage that whole thing.

anyways let me know what you think
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PostSubject: Re: Serious business   Tue Dec 15, 2015 7:47 am

ooh, damn. So everyone is gonna look at her as a bad seed. Bunny would be pretty devastated at failing her station and being disliked by her new people and her husband. She would easily turn to Kin if he were available. Seeking any kind of comfort.

I was gonna have one of the guards that was sent along to have a huge thing for her so maybe he can also play a role in the sabotage. Believing he could have her if Kujo threw her away.

I bet Bunny having a child with the second Prince first would be a huge threat, also it would look super bad on Kujo. Would Kujo need a child with Bunny, not a Concubine, to solidify his station? Would concubine children have any hold onto the thrown? Kin is after the thrown right?

I actually wanted to include some other kingdom characters. Maybe a shape-shiftier elf. I figure High Elfs would not want the Drow to unite with any kingdoms. IT would be fun to throw teiflings in there, being an ally to the Drow. The Kajar are a young kingdom so I don't see them having many strong connects yet.


Maybe someone could try and take Bunny's life if it gets to bad. Wanting the King to have a new queen who could produce heirs.
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PostSubject: Re: Serious business   Wed Dec 16, 2015 5:37 am

"Despite Kujo and Kinichi being the Queens son she wants to see Kinichi crowned king. All because she despises the king.
Kujo's nickname from the court is Prince of the Moon. Maybe due to the night he was born.
Kinichi's nickname is the Queens Son. Implying that the king wants little to nothing to do with him and that he;s coddled by his mother. He gets his way but not because of the respect of his peers but because it's easier for him to have his way then to deal with the Queen's rage.

To gain the throne the Prince's must have one direct line of royal blood.
Example:
Kujo- his father and mother.
Kinichi- his mother
Need to be wed to royalty or a noblewoman.
Kujo- to Bunny
Kinichi- Possibly Bunny's Lady in waiting. She could be of high standing....somewhere. Also, Bunny's affection towards Kinichi could make the Lady in waiting want to team up with Imani. I think the ladin in waiting should kill Imani. More of that later.

And then a first born heir. I don't know if you wanted the Kajar to be old fashioned where the king ruled, but I think the Drow would be even with gender. So male or female baby would work. Once they have all things I don't know how they should go through and declare themselves king. But the queen could be helping Kinichi to do all this in private.

I don't know what role Lady could have in this. Or what she could be doing? Maybe she could see Kinichi and Bunny or Kinichi and L.I.W and tell Kujo.

Kujo is going to have a masters in arms so I could use her for something too. Nothing bad though. But I do think later on Kujo should be put in a position to choose Lady or Bunny.

Also! I think Kinichi would come out publicly with his desire to be king with the announcement of L>I>W being pregnant. I think Bunny should also be pregnant to but its a rocky pregnancy due to all the herbs Imani had given her. So I think L>I>W should be killed because of treason against the princess. So, she'd die and I think Bunny should lose the baby too."
-I typed this up last night but forgot to post it.
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Kajar ruling system. The next king must be male and must be born from both the former king and queen. If none are produced then it would go to the closest relative to the family line. A child with parents of noble blood only.  Thought: The crown can also be won through challenge but only if the king accepts the challenge. (Young kings will always accept the challenge out of pride). I want them to be somewhat like tribal mixed with somewhat classic nobility.
Kajar don’t have concubines but they do have lovers. Not publicly. It is more of a scandal if the Queen is revealed with a lover than a king, though they have lovers anyways. The Queen is a symbol of Strength, Purity, Mercy and Justice among the people. She assists in ruling with the King (Court meetings and council meetings and such stuff). I don't really need to go to in depth with the Kajar since I figure most the story would be with the Drows. Unless we bring a story ark later with her brother or something. Much later thinking here.

Okay so I figure the Kajar would expect Bunny to be the Queen. They would be put out if another Queen took the throne. They would not breach the agreement or treaty but it would cause a rift in the public. Like fights can start out and stuff among the common.
OH! I was thinking that since the two kingdoms are trying to connect and be peaceful and stuff that Kajar would be entering the Drow city. Like maybe a few merchant families could come along. Maybe at one point Bunny can stand against a punishment against one and people will see it basically as favoring her own kind. Plus we could use them in schemes and such. Like when people start to look down on Bunny for not getting pregnant there could be turmoil and skirmishes.

Lady in waiting could be a relative to Bunny. Cousin maybe.

Lady wants Kujo to be King and wants to be his Queen. She thinks Kinichi would be a terrible King. Wants to get rid of both him and Bunny. I could see her assisting Imani in getting herbs or as you say tell Kujo when Bunny and Kinichi are together.
Lady is the type that would kill someone to get them out of the way but is smart enough to where it never comes to her, or its seen as an act of self defence. Weapons she would use would be a dagger or poison.
I would see Lady having a high rank among the nobles, also to be trained in things to do with being Queen. Well educated in their system. She would be tarnishing Bunny’s reputation to any noble who will listen.

Kujo picking between Lady and Bunny is always canon. BTW I’m using her new name from here on out. Elida. So don’t forget!

Has Kinichi shown any desire for the Throne? I figure everyone knows the queen wants him to but is it known that he also wants it?
Is Kujo like the King? Does the Queen have any motherly feelings towards Kujo? Has the King always disliked Kinichi?
Does Kujo already have children with any of his concubines? I assume Elida would be one of them. Nobel women are concubines right? Or is it just any pretty woman that Kujo chooses?

Maybe the Guard that likes Bunny could confront Kujo in a bad way, during the period where she can’t get pregnant and people are regretting the treaty, and will have to be punished. Like attacks him maybe. It could be serious. Add another execution? Oh! people could start saying the new Princess only brings death.

WHAT IF THE OTHER KINGDOM IS GRIFFIN PEOPLE!! It can either be the one that doesn’t want an alliance between Drow and Kajar or just another somewhat neighboring kingdom. There could be dwarfs.
By the way. Kajar will be able to turn to big cats. Whatever kind they are. There are even house cats. There will be trinkets that suppress these abilities.

Alright. So right now we have Bunny arriving and meeting her husband. Did we say the wedding would be pretty immediate or is there going to be like a welcoming thing or waiting period? I figure it would be a pretty quick thing, like the next day or within the week. How do you view the customs of the consummation? Do they go off the word of Kujo, does someone need to see or hear and get proof? (It'll be just a big orgy. Cross over of 50 shades harem begins. We will be rich)
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PostSubject: Re: Serious business   Thu Dec 17, 2015 12:41 am

Gonna answer the parent questions I missed. So Kujo would be the assumed king. I think that the father would step down and possibly crown him king. But then like how some things go where 'oh there was this clause 1832388 years ago that states blah blah blah that these requirements need to be met before someone is crowned king' Or the king could rule until death. Or something. Maybe part of Kinichi's plan could just be to kill Kujo. But then that's too many assassination attempts. Maybe the king could have been killed in battle? So Kujo is the assumed king but he has to meet the other requirments I listed to be named?

Kujo is going to take ruling the country seriously like his father did, maybe with a gentler, less war hungry hand. He will defend the country if he needs to though and because of the treaty he would treat the Kajar like his own. Like defense wise. He'd be more patient. Cause like the business one I wrote a note saying that he's warm and kind to the people who have gained his trust, because while he is a king he's still a young man. So I think right now the only person he would truly be candid with would be Elida or his trainer. More likely his trainer. I could see Elida just being someone to get his frustrations out on. But he would still buy her jewelry and provide for her in extravagant ways. Like I have an idea for the market place. It could be open and Kujo could take bunny. And there'd be a little jewelry stand and he would stop and buy a necklace or something and maybe bunny could be curious about where it's going or if it's for her and then see it on Elida a few days later.

The concubines I think would have to be noble women? Like I could see people dating commoners but then I could see that getting sloppy because the common women would want to make their station higher. It depends on the person. I think Kujo would just stick to the one, maybe another when he was younger. Maybe a maid could have been bold with him or that could have been elida. We need to decide how they met.

No kids for Kujo. Maybe one for Kinichi. And like always he hates it. Maybe instead of a kid in the modern (Cause I had that long fake dramatic plot. Lesbian marina and lady?) he could have one in fantasy. Maybe he shunned the girl but she comes to the castle to beg for scraps for her son atleast.

also I like how Kujo is cold on the inside and warm hearted on the inside. And Kinichi is warm on the outside and bitter and cold on the inside.
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PostSubject: Re: Serious business   Thu Dec 17, 2015 7:37 am

Questions:
Did the queen and king every love one another? Was it more like Kujo came about because it was their duty?

Are you talking about Bunny’s second child or were you saying the first one survives? I could see her being really paranoid during her second pregnancy. There is always the option of someone having twins.

Once Bunny and Kujo are married I could see Elida trying to beat Bunny. But Bunny has the kid first and Elida doubles her efforts to get pregnant. She has no problem taking Bunny’s offspring out in the future so that her and Kujo’s child gets the throne.

So maybe this guard had tried to be Bunny’s concubine on several occasion but she turns him down, she would wait till her first child with Kujo was secure before taking a lover. If Bunny and Kujo begin to show signs of actually liking each other the guard could just snap. (attack scene commence)

I love that Kinichi has this ugly side. It gives him an interesting twist.

Going back to them being kids. Maybe Kinichi can take Bunny to see something cool to impress her, but its something dangerous like up on the mountains where she could slip or seeing a underground boar that could attack. Bunny gets hurt, an injury that maybe leaves a scar.

I changed my post a little. We could have the two marry the next day. Bunny could have arrived late so they could just have a small festive welcome thing for the commoners in the city and they could wed the next day. But I’m not against the idea that they get married the day she arrives. I don’t doubt a lot of cultures would do that when sending off a bride, when it has to do with treaties anyways.

More on weddings. Ideas on Kajar marriage rituals.I have a lot of things I want to use so you might have to tell me to chill out a little.
Kajar weddings are very colorful, the brides dresses are usually red, the color standing for strength and fortune. The Bride is first cleaned and rubbed in scented oils. Then painted with colors over her body. Like henna but paint, simple patterns, it is meant to enhance the woman’s beauty for her husband. (When the two return after consummation the groom and bride would be smeared with the paint. This was one way of showing the consummation had happened)
Bride is put in a dress, mostly red in color, made of thin fabric, almost see through when standing close enough. (talking distance) Bunny’s dress will have a one of those long tails...a...train…..something…. anyways. Bride is brought to groom and groom then removes the mask from her face, getting the first look. Since They are in the Drow kingdom I figure Bunny will just take it off once she is before Kujo.
Wedding commences, groom says words, bride says words and present her dowery, food, gold, jewels, artisan stuff. In Kajar weddings the consummation is done immediately following the wedding then the two newlyweds come out and the celebrating begins, or wedding party.

Elida. Elida. I like the teenage romance kind of thing. They could have a pretty long relationship. I’m not sure how I’m gonna approach Bunny’s feeling progression with Kujo. I could see her admiring a lot of Kujo’s qualities- responsibility, a strong character. He’s also good looking so she could have an early crush on her husband. When Kujo gives Elida the necklace maybe that’s when Bunny really starts to take notice of her. Seeing that she could possibly mean more to her husband then just being his concubine. Sees her as a threat.

I wanna have things happen that show conflict in Bunny and Kujo learning to rule together. Bunny could be really soft hearted so she doesn’t give out violent punishments even when they are deserved. Ha maybe she tries to beat Kujo to giving out sentence. Like hes ready to head down to call the punishment but when he gets there a guys all, ‘your wife has already sentenced him sir. You just missed her.’ Bunny is all trying to find things to be busy and avoid him because she knows she’s in trouble. Or just try to never be alone with him so he can’t scold her.

Alright. We need to think of character positions we need to fill.

you have: drow King, Queen, LIW, Numero Uno,

I have: Kajar King, Queen, Bother-heir, a guard, Dnoblewoman

Positions available: Queen’s guards, Drow guards, drow Noble families. Concubines, Other kingdom noblemen-women. Merchants of both K&D

As with the Lady in waiting, there could be a few kajar handmaidens of noble birth. We have: Imani-maiden numero uno. LIW-Lady in waiting, Handmaides: 2-3. Decent posi.






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PostSubject: Re: Serious business   Fri Dec 18, 2015 8:06 am

Oh I love the king and Queens past idea. Would the king have any concubine children? The would mean more siblings.
Is it known that Kinichi isn't the kings son? Publicly

Would we have her as part of the Judging of LIW? Isn' she going to kill Imani? or should that happen before they become king and queen.

Oh it would be fun to have him painted too. I was wondering how the wedding would work, with mixing cultures.

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PostSubject: Re: Serious business   Sat Dec 19, 2015 6:26 pm

I just feel like the Kajar would be the type to consummate asap. They have always traded brides between tribes for all kinds of things so it’s like a signature on a trade agreement. Now that you’ve mentioned them being smeared in paint during the party I really want it to happen. >.< SO Cute.
I was gonna suggest the same with the people cheering and teasing the groom and bride into their chambers. (They could be the ones that apply the paint as the couple walks through them. I’ve seen it where the crowd always kind of undresses them as they go, not completely naked but if we go with the guests smearing the paint then they would have to either wear simple outfits or be stripped or changed)

Sex: The quick and gentle type? I’m sure they both would want it over with quickly. As you say there is plenty of time later for them to actually explore and enjoy one another. Maybe during they are both trying to be quiet, since itll be pretty awkward with the excited group outside, but then the group starts commenting on how quiet it is and teasing that the prince should pick it up or you know. So Bunny could play it up so the group can hear, to make Kujo look good to his peers and also so the two could have a little giggle moment.
Imani could give her the tea right after. Drink this while I  help you get dressed again.
The deal could include that the wedding would be held in Kajar custom. So we could say that both the couples wear the masks and they both get painted. The blood ritual could also be kajar or that could be from the Drows.

I’ve been thinking about the virgin thing. I do believe that since she is the Princess of the kingdom then yes, she would be expected to be a virgin. But I’m gonna have Bunny be experienced, like she’s done most things up to the point of him actually going inside her. Probably with a guard kid. Maybe the guard that came along. What if he was all ‘i’ve touched her too!’

Room situation, most of those types have their own room. Like rooms right next to each other, maybe even with one of those doors inside the rooms that lead to each others.
Timeline looks good so far. The LIW propositioned by the Drow Queen? Okay. So maybe three months of no pregnancy and everyone begins to question the princess’ fertility? The maids would know she wasn’t pregnant if she is still having her moon cycle. If they are drow staff then I’m sure rumor would get out. Maybe someone could help start the word about the princess not getting pregnant. Imani or Elida. Maybe Imani could kill the king.

We will still need something to happen after Imani begins feeding her herbs. Focus away from the whole pregnancy. Show the daily routines of Drows or Bunny learning her positions or being introduced to all the cunning politics. Elida could like take her under the wing and sabotage somehow that way.
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PostSubject: Re: Serious business   Mon Dec 21, 2015 1:47 am

Okay. I think that the guests should like lead them to their rooms while stripping them down to their underwear and then maybe once they get into the room one of the maids could paint the designs on them cause if the people following them down the hall do it, it's going to be sloppy before they even get the chance to do anything to each other. Then the maid will leave the room and then Kujo can take off the mask. I'm not going to have him wear one. Cause I mean the girl would just have to accept if he was ugly or not anyways.

Well I just mean not wanting her to be uncomfortable for the first time. Maybe gentle wasn't the right word. Careful maybe. Even though I doubt if they were trying to get it done quickly that that would be possible anyways. That sounds cute, her playing it up lol. It'd be cute if like they were like awkwardly quiet then she starts faking it for the crowd but then they start getting more in to each other and drown out the noise from the crowd then it's just heavy breathing and soft moans shared between the two of them.

Okay, so bunny hasn't had penetrative sex? (So official?) Ooh that would be bad. Okay so I had that one guard Roscoe, big bald fat guard. Should he know that they fooled around? Like maybe he was trying to get him to stay home because it was a conflict of interest but he came along promising he'd be fine. Would he be trying to steal bunny away the whole time? Would he do it in front of Kinichi too? Like flirting with her to get her away.

Okay, yeah like Imani could be waiting for her in her rooms to freshen her up and to give her the tea. Or we could do where she like hands her the small jar of spermicidal lube. Cause Kujo wouldn't think anything of it, just think she was excited for him.

I don't think Kujo would care that she had expiriences or not. Cause he has had them, but I think with the guard gloating it would piss him off. Because he's not just talking about the Kajar princess anymore, he's talking about the drow queen. What would bunny do if Kujo insisted on a new guard? Would she stick up for him? I think this note is going to have a lot of our characters talking amongst themselves. Which will be good for plot and interesting to see played out. A lot of typing for us individually though.

I think the blood thing should be drow. Something she wasn't expecting since she doesn't know much about them. I think there should be a ring exchange too. Drow sigil or something. Or the blood thing could just be a tradition between countries unitied?

By propositioned by the queen I mean asked if she would like to become queen by marrying Kinichi.

Yeah. I definitely think there should be talk going around about Bunny not getting pregnant. Maybe bunny could walk in on some maids who are making her bed talking about it or something. Imani would be trying to sooth her and would get on to people who talk about it, just to keep up appearances. I think Kujo would be disapointed. Not because he wants a kid so soon but because it's a hinderance from him becoming king. Would Elida be trying to have his child during this time? Would she become more needy with bunny around? Does bunny care that he has Elida? I don't remember if I asked these questions or not.

Maybe the king could be getting on to Kujo about why it's taking so long to have a child. Maybe he would take it out on bunny but I'm not quite sure how. I was thinking that if Kujo was getting aggravated and cold during the situation she could turn to Kinichi. Cause then I know then he would take it out on her. Like idk if Bunny and Kin would kiss or something, I know Kin would be hands on. But if someone else saw her and Kinichi and word got back to Kujo I was thinking maybe he would accuse her of not wanting to have a child by him on purpose. Or asking her things if she wants Kinichi because he's more passionate than him, things like that. Like what is Kinichi providing that he can't? And maybe the rumors going around can be eating at her and they can have a fight.

Imani kill the king? How and for what reason? Just to get him out of the picture.
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PostSubject: Re: Serious business   Mon Dec 21, 2015 6:00 am

Wedding. So do you want to go with Kujo already being at the alter and her coming in and walking down, the classic way? Then a holy guy says some things, they say something then blood ritual, drag, undress and paraded into a room where maids paint them. I like how you have it, where it starts quiet, faking it, and that makes them feel less awkward enough to actually enjoy it.

Lol Penetrative sex. Since she’s only 14-16 as it is then I’d say she would have done no more than some making out and curious poking and fumbling, maybe some dry humping once. But she wouldn’t have done it with the guard. She has a high standard for men she would bring in her bed, Kujo isn’t a choice.

Yeah I think Roscoe should know about them and have tried to convince him to stay home. The Guard will have started out just wanting to be with Bunny, in secret or not, but when she turns him down he will start to get super jealous and angry. He would outwardly flirt in front of Kinichi and become more aggressive after she turned him down. So when he sees that Bunny and Kujo are starting to actually show real interest in each other, and her showing none in him, he snaps, all crazy like and will try to take her away. Like you said he could storm into her room and try to physically drag her out when she doesn’t listen. Kujo can come in then and they can fight.

Idea if you want drama. So Guard attacks Kujo and they grapple, Guard begins to seem really confident and Bunny notices that he is not wearing the jewelry to suppress his transformation. Guard attacks and changes, catching Kujo off guard. Turns into a leopard and takes a good bite out of a part of Kujo, like his arm, not deadly just to injure. Bunny throws something big the cat, who then turns to pounce on her. The guard decides maybe he will just kill them both and is about to go for her throat when Kujo thrusts a pocket knife or something at him to incapacitate him. Roscoe could come in on the scene as well, having been suspicious of the guard behavior.

Idk, what do you think of them turning it to cats and having some kind of visible suppressor? I'm kind of torn against the idea. I don't want it to feel like to much. But I think it could be interesting if its not over done. Like thrown in subtly to where you almost forget they can do it then boom, something happens and there's a cat now.

Maybe Imani can switch it up. The spermicide the first time to help make it easier and later she can change to tea.

If Kujo insisted that Bunny send for a new guard she would first think it was silly, since it is a four-day ride. Depending on when we have it. If she has become aware of Elida and Kujo’s tight relationship she might be jealous enough to keep him. She has no right to argue against him having a concubine so she might keep the guard for her own satisfaction. (Not sex wise but liking that it makes Kujo angry) I don’t think she would ever have sex with this guy. She might almost have sex with Kinichi but I kind of think it’s cute if she only ends up sleeping with Kujo, even if he and other think she has slept with others. Do you think that would be unrealistic in this situation?

Scratch Elida having his kid so early. I feel like she would see Bunny as only a temporary problem, as well as the child. It is not uncommon for people to have accidents. She would still be able to become queen. Since they are young she won’t try that until she feels he is pulling away. Then she might try to get pregnant so she would still have a hold on him and a hand towards the throne in a way.

I like the scene with Bunny overhearing the maids. Maybe it’s after she had already heard many people group together whispering and watching her, she can snap at them and chase them off. When she notices Kujo becoming distant or just different then she can run to Imani and beg her for help.

Do you have an idea how Imani is going to get caught? So is having an heir one of the requirements for the throne? Bunny would have to get pregnant before he gets the throne or has to have the child?

What if say the griffins are the bad guys, they start to ambush traders and the dress up like Kajar and pretend to be a wild group against the treaty. This could be some stuff going on between the pregnancy, also the Guard thing is a great distraction.

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PostSubject: Re: Serious business   Tue Dec 22, 2015 12:52 am

Another thing about the wedding. I think they would approach the altar together, say their vows. ( Google vows from corpse bride. I think they'd work for this.) Blood ritual, and then maybe walk out on to the balcony to be presented for the commoners. The mask would be part of the wedding right? like he'd take it off before? At the altar or before coupling? They can have their hands bandaged before they get presented to the crowd. Oh yeah! and rings!

Yeah. Imani would only do the spermicide the first time mostly because I think they'd be too busy to have the tea. but then typing that out I take that back. When they're prepping her for the wedding she could have tea. Say it was something to calm her nerves.

Unrealistic how? I mean Kinichi would want to and would probably try to have sex with her often. like I could see him trying to show her interesting places in the castle and then try to make out with her or something. The way the guard sounds I think the only way he'd get away with having sex with her would be rape. So I mean her only being with Kinichi could be a possibility. Even though she has no authority on if he has Elida would she ever ask him to stop? I don't remember if I asked that or not though. Maybe much later on.

I don't know how Kujo is going to squeeze in time for Elida because I don't know how often he would meet with bunny to try to have a child with her. I think for like the first month and a half he wouldn't be with Elida out of respect. But the longer it takes Bunny to have kids the more he'll find himself with Elida. Bunny could always overhear them having an intimate conversation. Maybe it could be about them having children together. bunny would be over hearing a lot of things haha. Like maybe she could try to initiate intimacy with kujo since he's been upset about the child and elida could be in his room.

I'm trying to think of positive things that could happen to bunny too. Esp between her and Kujo. I don't remember if I mentioned her watching in on his training, but maybe he could try to teach her some defense moves. Maybe she can knock him on his ass to his surprise.

I think he'd want to teach her history and I think he could start to give her a tour of the castle and be pulled away.

yeah having an heir could be a requirement. Like maybe it was one that was instilled during the war. Since drow kings went to fight with their men they wanted to ensure the throne would be held by someone from their bloodline.

The griffin thing would be good. Would it start a new war?


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PostSubject: Re: Serious business   Tue Dec 22, 2015 7:17 am

Is there something separating the Village and the Drow city? Like the river.

We need a separate profile section from the old school. I want to put a post for the Kajar’s and one for the Drows. There we can keep our notes on the kingdoms, so we can both have access to them when we are writing. I wish I could my documents in a folder you could access.

I like Roscoe being Bunny’s old-time guard. She will have someone on her side. I’m gonna make a Drow character, noble, guard, Kujo’s cousin, someone in the castle that is fully for the marriage. Wanting the peace so she/he will also be on Bunny’s side.

Amulets is a yes then. I’ve changed my mind on the ears though. I want their human forums to look human. Maybe feline features like big eyes and of course the pupils but that’s about it. They also have good senses but not as good as when they are transformed. Back onto the amulets, I’m gonna either have them all made from one stone, or any stone but it has to be cut in a certain shape and worn visibly. They will be stone’s cast by the Kajar’s shaman magic. I think they should be a requirement, and as you say to make the Drow feel more comfortable about having them about. Other Kajar should be able to sense if another is about to change, so even if they don’t wear the amulet most Kajar will have a few second warning to another’s changing. The guards could have them placed breastplates. Maybe the Kajar are required to wear it around their neck. Like a large stone cut in a rough oval shape. Probably any color.

Ah! I forgot about the purple blood! That will be shocking for her. Bunny: *horrified* “They put poison is her blood!!!”

Brainstorming about why the kingdoms don’t get along. So the Kajar used to be wild tribes, all scrabbling over territory, food, and other such. So I imagine these people would attack any travelers or nearby people. It could be a majority of Drow since they are close and maybe the main merchant road goes past. Then a Kajar steps up with an army and a civil war ensues to conjoin the Kajar, they are too busy to worry about their disagreement with the Drow so skirmishes continue between the two people. Once the Kingdom was formed, the Kajar king built his kingdom and city: Kituo Cha. Anyways, we go through two kings as the kingdom figures out its systems and quirks and Bunny’s Father comes around as a king. His passion is to continue his grandfather’s dream of creating a mighty kingdom of his people so now that the Kajar are mostly fully under rule, Bunny’s dad can focus on creating trade and allies and connections. Seeing the bloodshed that was happening between his people and the Drow he can want to fix that.


Wedding Stuff:

The father walking the bride to her husband wouldn’t be a Kajar custom. The armor sounds cute! I want bunny to have a really dramatic head peace or something. I want to play up the tribal fee by using several colors, not just a one colored dress. I want thinking of making the dress really risqué with sheer fabric. Like if you were standing up close to her you would be getting a good view of parts. Like oh. I can faintly see her nipples. But I’m not sure. I might still go with it. Like the Bride kind of flaunt themselves, showing what their family has, beauty, money, power, more goats. That such. Still exploring.
Mask should probably be taken off during the wedding. That allows the custom of the husband getting the first close sight of her and it allows the people to see her as well. It’s a cute idea to have them take it off in private but I feel it would be weird if the people didn’t see what she looked at during the wedding.
RINGS! They can be like the kiss, exchange them on the balcony before the people. The blood ritual should be done as you say, in doors before the important people.
It would be weird for Imani to give her tea at that time.

After wedding:

The first month and a half sleeping with Bunny is a good time. It can be like an almost every night thing then starts to dwindle as he gets disheartened when her moon day arrives. Showing she was not pregnant. Then he can start to turn to Elida. Maybe someone could tell Bunny that they overheard that conversation between Elida and Kujo. Like LIW or Imani or someone who just doesn’t like her.

So Elida, Kujo, and Bunny, are together in a setting and Bunny’s all ‘wink wink husband, come with your wife.’ I like that, try to ruffle Elida’s feathers. Elida will play dirty. Lol I can see them both like arriving at Kujo’s door at the same time one night and maybe start to argue on who is going in.

I’ve decided that Bunny would have sex with Kinichi. Maybe at first she tries not to, stopping before anything got serious, since it is her husband’s brother after all. But maybe when Kujo buys the jewelry for Elida and she sees Elida go into Kujo’s room one night she could get angry and run off to do something stupid to make her feel better. Aka sleep with Kinichi. Then she can do it a few more times because it’s fun. With Bunny asking if Kujo would turn Elida away, I’m not sure. Depends on how things play. I’m leaning towards she might suggest in a way that he look for a new concubine.

The first thing she would probably do is begin studying on Drow. Like Drow Queen training. Maybe when Kujo and her both have free time he can lead her around, like to the market or to show her around his land. Maybe sometimes when Bunny has free time she sneaks on during Kujo’s training and watches. He can notice this and call her over one day to teach her somethings. She can be quicker than he expected. Since he might try to go easy on her he can be caught off guard and as you say ass on ground.

LIW Kills IMANI! LIW could say that she found out about Imani putting herbs in the Princess’ tea and when she confronted Imani telling her she was going to tell the Princess, Imani attacked her and she had to defend herself, accidentally killing Imani. It’s perfect! Now we have a way of Bunny finding out about the birth control and it gives LIW a perfect way out on killing Imani.

I’ve completely forgotten LIW whole deal. I’ll have to go back and read about her.


I'll approach the Griffin subject on tomorrows note hopefully. Time flies trying to put your thoughts together.
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PostSubject: Re: Serious business   Fri Jan 01, 2016 6:22 am

Beginning:
Nerium: range 30s. She could be my noble who is against a Kajar woman becoming Queen, but she is all for the peace treaty. It’s a shame such a handsome man was lost to a cat.
Narloss: Hand of the guard or head honcho of the palace guard. 50ish man who has a grudge against Kajar for the loss of his son. The type to take it to his grave. Could be used to sabotage and such.
I've also created two Griffins, maybe generals, twins.
Female and male twins, looks similar but not identical.
Female might be named Shanara
I'm having problems with figuring out the Griffins. I mean arent they tech part lions. Maybe they think they have some right over Kajar land so they are trying to sabotage and take them out. OR they want to pressure them into giving them land, or bribe them to go away.
They should also have slaves.
The Kajar have a type gladiators arena but they are mostly volunteer, such as in game of throne. Maybe some criminals that have to face a giant animal.
Are you keeping the glowing plants? I could see those being lots of colors. Also what about ladies wearing colorful eyeshadows, like lots of colors together. Do they paint their buildings?
War is always worse on the common as game of thrones has taught me. We will just have to show it somehow. Either with characters that live in the environment or by having our characters go through the markets and such. Our Market characters could come in use here.
Idea: The prince takes Sungura somewhere out of the drow kingdom, maybe to visit the moon elves. They are ambushed by a band of the group trying to stop the union. Bunny and Lady are brought out before Kujo, who is tied up. They make him choose who gets hit. “Looks like the Princes prefers blond pussy over his own kind.” Rough guys.
The leader will basically be a gnoll. So Hyena man with eyepatch, tough and rough mercenary. I might have my griffin twins here but in the background, not wanting to draw attention yet. (They will be Griffin assassins, sent by their Queen)
Either Kujo gets loose and beats them or the guards do and they battle their way out. Lady can be distant until no bruises are left. Her pride injured.

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okay. I wanna know about Drow guards system. I wanted to make some side characters. Are their guards mixed. female or male. Castle servant layout. Nobes, cousins, or other important peeps, do some live in the castle or do they all live in the houses around. Will there be pretty frequent guests in the castle? Such as other kingdom sending suitors for Kinichi or friends and such.

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